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30A – Final Reflection
Here is a picture of my foster and I. Fostering is one of the reasons for my involvement in Project Canis 1. Overall, this journey has been...
Here is a picture of my foster and I. Fostering is one of the reasons for my involvement in Project Canis 1. Overall, this journey has been...
Hello Taylor, I really enjoyed your elevator pitch. The scenario you painted in the beginning of the pitch definitely allowed viewers to engage and understand what goes on in the daily life of a student. The only thing I would tell you to add is some kind of statistic, like for example, “40% of students at UF say the reason they are late to class is because of parking issues.” This will really seal the deal and ensure it is a well-rounded and persuasive pitch. Other than that, awesome job, keep it up!
ReplyDeleteHi Taylor,
ReplyDeleteI really liked your elevator pitch video. I can tell you practiced a lot and gave great eye contact consistently throughout the whole pitch. I agree with Ericks comment about using a real statistic to show people how real this problem is and how your app will solve the problem. I would defineltely use this app, keep up the good work!
Hey Taylor, loved your elevator pitch! The problem you have pitched is something I have gone through way too many times. Your app sounds like it would be very useful and would help so many students in college campuses all around the world. You spoke very clearly and illustrated the problem to a very great depths that many people can relate too. I love the idea of this app and the opportunities it provides as it not only helps finds parking but alerts you of incoming traffic. My only question would be how does the app know what spots are available? Do you recommend sensors on every spot or do you have another idea planned?
ReplyDeleteTaylor,
ReplyDeleteYou definitely have found an issue that needs to be fixed. Your elevator pitch accurately depicts the problem people face. Like Mateo, I have lots of questions about the financial model of your app so it will make money. The nuts and bolts of the data will be interesting too. How you get the data that a space is empty will be interesting. Costly sensors, camera monitoring, or an employee rotating the lot are just a few of the ways. Ultimately the customer doesn't care as long as the data is helpful, accurate, and not too expensive for the benefit they receive.